C-2 Law Bias Free Language essay

DescriptionRead the passage. Rewrite the passage removing ALL instances of BIASED LANGUAGE.
In 5 -7 sentences explain the impact BIASED language can have on the overall effectiveness of a persons speech presentation.
PASSAGE:
Chris Jones is an African American male medical student who went to John Hopkins University. One day at the hospital, he received a page over the intercom: “Dr. Jones, please come to the ER, stat.” When Dr. Jones arrived at the ER, he spotted a young girl screaming about a car wreck and pointing to an old geezer and a young boy. Dr. Jones told the young girl to calm down, that she was behaving like a child. Dr. Jones quickly approached the two patients and took control of the situation. Although the older patient was conscious, Dr. Jones didn’t talk to him because he thought he was probably deaf. Instead, he turned to the fragile young girl, lowered his voice, patted her on the head, and said, “Don’t worry, all mankind will be safe with me around.” He told her that he would perform surgery on both patients because the only other doctor available was Katie Morris, who is a woman, and a woman cannot handle this amount of blood and gore.
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