prof macqueen

 Hey Eray, you did not follow the directions for the detailed outline, so I cannot give you feedback on your outline.  Specifically: 1. Your outline is not organized, 2. You have questions for main points which is unacceptable, and 3. Your focus is off. You need to focus on your argument/thesis and make sure everything always relates back to your focus! You also need some academic research to back up your arguments. (See Research Process Folder feedback).  Please take a look at the direct comments for some feedback however.
Dr. Karen Carlisi, Nov 19 at 4:40pmI used Google Scholar to do a quick search and found some very good peer-reviewed academic journal articles on your topic! You need to put more effort into looking at the research into WHY revoking DACA would be so harmful. Some possible keywords: deportation of undocumented college students  Eray, you have clearly made some progress in your research, as demonstrated in your folder. However, you still do not have two peer-reviewed academic journal articles, and you do not have the required research NOTECARDS in your folder. You are researching a very recent problem, but the problem must have an earlier research base. To solve your research article gap, (especially because your detailed outline is still incomplete), you need to think about how to BUILD your argument for your paper so that you have a REASON for arguing about DACA at all. I’m sure you could find some research that shows the damaging, psychological effects of removing people forcefully from the country they grew up in. Perhaps try these keywords: negative effects of deportation? 
Approximate price: $22
We value our customers and so we ensure that what we do is 100% original..

With us you are guaranteed of quality work done by our qualified experts.Your information and everything that you do with us is kept completely confidential.You have to be 100% sure of the quality of your product to give a money-back guarantee. This describes us perfectly. Make sure that this guarantee is totally transparent.The Product ordered is guaranteed to be original. Orders are checked by the most advanced anti-plagiarism software in the market to assure that the Product is 100% original. The Company has a zero tolerance policy for plagiarism.The Free Revision policy is a courtesy service that the Company provides to help ensure Customer’s total satisfaction with the completed Order. To receive free revision the Company requires that the Customer provide the request within fourteen (14) days from the first completion date and within a period of thirty (30) days for dissertations.The Company is committed to protect the privacy of the Customer and it will never resell or share any of Customer’s personal information, including credit card data, with any third party. All the online transactions are processed through the secure and reliable online payment systems.By placing an order with us, you agree to the service we provide. We will endear to do all that it takes to deliver a comprehensive paper as per your requirements. We also count on your cooperation to ensure that we deliver on this mandate.